Technical Difficulties

Hey guys, I was having some trouble with the page, so Shamus came over to my desk and drew some notes for me, and then he helpfully edited the script a bunch, meaning that I had to redo the layout in half the panels (a panel that is 2/3 full of one tree, three words, and a little person down in the corner? Great!). So in light of the time I have to finish this page, and the trouble I'm already having, you get to have his notes instead, and I get another week to work on the page! We all win! Except maybe you guys. And Shamus too. Hm. >_>

Just to be clear...

Why yes, Lance is poking the sky with his poking stick in the last frame. I suspect that won't make it into the final page.